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Feedback needed

Postby Binkatron5000 » Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:05 am

Hey folks! I need to paint something right away as a gift but need feedback first. Something about this just looks... off, but I am having problems figuring out where I went wrong! Thoughts? Suggestions? Criticisms? FEED ME YOUR BRAINSTUFFS PLX!

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Note that the red was splotched on in 3 seconds, so that will be touched up. That or maybe I will do a red splatter effect across the painting. Would that look ok?
Also I will balance the framing a bit better for the actual picture; it was done somewhat hastily. YAY FOR MS PAINT
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby chrismachine » Tue Apr 19, 2011 2:16 pm

I think if the white that isn't part of the face were just a shade or two darker everywhere like it is in the corners, like barely perceptibly, it would lower the sort-of optical trickery I'm seeing where the focal point effect seems almost off... I have no idea if that's of any use or even practical, or if it would actually improve things as I am no artist... but it popped into my head so I fed it to you ;)
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby Binkatron5000 » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:16 pm

yesss some gray would be nice in background, thankies!
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby slydon » Wed Apr 20, 2011 2:43 am

A little shading would make this even more awesome. :)
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby Skimba » Wed Apr 20, 2011 9:47 am

I like it. My only possible suggestion that's any different than another's, is to maybe (as you are fixing up the red) use a darker shade into it also? I'd think maybe that would give the impression that this creature has been feasting for a while. mwahahahaha
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby giantsfan97 » Wed Apr 20, 2011 11:24 pm

My eyes are drawn to the blank white areas near the black border. Perhaps gray there? I dunno
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby Binkatron5000 » Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:27 pm

I painted it, got rid of all the stupid hair and lines. I still don't like how it turned out, but it's gotta be sent out. Me so amateur.
And yes, the wall is the same sickly green colour as the zombie :P Sorry for the blur
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Here's the same thing but with my flash; colours suck but texture of splatters can be seen a bit better. Clicky to embiggenate
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby Skimba » Sun May 01, 2011 1:32 am

wunderbar!
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby jvcc » Sun May 01, 2011 4:48 am

Whoa, awesome!
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby chrismachine » Sun May 01, 2011 11:09 am

That's pretty cool, and you took care of that fairly quickly as well!
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Re: Feedback needed

Postby Binkatron5000 » Sun May 01, 2011 11:48 am

Thanks guys, its encouraging to hear your responses!
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