Poetry is art, too

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Postby maychorian » Thu Jan 18, 2007 11:02 pm

Wow, Daniel. I think you have . . . potential.

Potential for what, I do not know and am afraid to ask.
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Postby Daniel. » Thu Jan 18, 2007 11:05 pm

Oh, you can't get enough of this! *rubs nipples*


I AM NO HORSE, THE LADY DOTH CRY
I AM NO ANT, THE HORSE WILL SING!
I AM THE DARKNESS
I AM YOUR FRIEND

THERE IS A FENCE
YOU WORRY, "IS IT SOFT?"
YOU WORRY
YOU WORRY
OH HOW YOU VERY MUCH WORRY

FILL MY SHOES
FILL THEM WITH CRAB PASTE
FOR THIS IS MIDNIGHT
MIDNIGHT AT CHRISTMAS

I KISS YOUR EYES
YOU GET AN INFECTION
THE MEDICATION IS MY LOVE
WHICH HAPPENS TO BE LITERALLY MEDICATION

WHICH IS LUCKY.



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Postby Dusk » Thu Jan 18, 2007 11:17 pm

::laughing fit::

If James were to read these and post the audio, I would probably have an orgasm of the face.
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Postby James » Thu Jan 18, 2007 11:19 pm

TOMORROW.
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Postby Dusk » Thu Jan 18, 2007 11:20 pm

I LIVE IN YOUR TOMORROW. PERMANENTLY.
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Postby kupo » Thu Jan 18, 2007 11:32 pm

Daniel. wrote:I KISS YOUR EYES
YOU GET AN INFECTION
THE MEDICATION IS MY LOVE
WHICH HAPPENS TO BE LITERALLY MEDICATION


This line gave me tears of joy.
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Postby coeurpur » Fri Jan 19, 2007 7:42 am

If..


..if my words were liquid,
you would be all wet:
surrounded by my fluids,
all over your bald planet..
. o O ( My Ah Counts? Duzzit? )

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Postby Saltine » Fri Jan 19, 2007 10:39 am

Here are some more constrained rhyming couplets I wrote. MAYBE I WON'T SCREW THIS ONE UP:

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One rascal I lost in retro flow,
Wolf or tern it, so lilacs are no.

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“Mix a menial, basinal pseudonym.â€Â
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Postby Veepa » Fri Jan 19, 2007 7:59 pm

Another timeless classic piece of awesome .. Well, the poetry forum liked it anyway.

The Bear and The Lion
I see droplets of gold on the mantle
I see your face within every raindrop.
A face so pure of love and apple juice
The liquid is over-flowing the cup and I can't find any paper towels.
The substance may soak through and stain forever, like your love did.

Even though, we're finished. The ever-lasting mistake floats within my head.
And so I drift away alone, within the ocean of apple juice that you created within me.
And just like grape juice, it will go bad, into the sun we sing and dance, while Lenny sends his praises.
One after another, they take a dive. Smack! Into the realm of Forgotten Stools.

The lion doesn't know better, for it's a lion.
But the bear should know better, for it is smarter than the lion.
[url=http://www.sharebigfile.com/file/64318/ferjon-wav.html]The river sweeps away the pain, like a pain-vacuum cleaner.
But the pain-bag is full, because I am full of pain.[/url]
And I cut myself once more.


-"Hey! I liked the imagery in your poem. I think starting around the end, it could've been done a bit better, but overall, this was a pretty good poem."

-"Your poem started out so positively, then ends in pain.
Like love often does. Liked the interesting metaphors you have here. Good write. Keep up the nice work."

-"Good imagery. :) Like Kat said, "interesting metaphors" :D
Pretty painful, but you've expressed it well.
Good job"
Long live the new flesh.

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Postby Dusk » Fri Jan 19, 2007 10:34 pm

James wrote:TOMORROW.


Just sayin'.
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Postby kupo » Fri Jan 19, 2007 10:44 pm

Dusk Bringer wrote:
James wrote:TOMORROW.


Just sayin'.


Your a parent. You should know that "tomorrow" always basically means "eventually."

"Mommy can we go to the park?"
"Tomorrow."


"Daddy, can you play a game with me?"
"Tomorrow."
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Postby Dusk » Fri Jan 19, 2007 10:52 pm

Oh yeah? Well.. you smell.
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Postby kupo » Fri Jan 19, 2007 10:55 pm

Dusk Bringer wrote:Oh yeah? Well.. you smell.


YOUR FACE.
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Postby Dusk » Fri Jan 19, 2007 10:57 pm

kupo wrote:
Dusk Bringer wrote:Oh yeah? Well.. you smell.


YOUR FACE.

WHILE I'M ASLEEP!
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Postby kupo » Fri Jan 19, 2007 11:02 pm

Dusk Bringer wrote:
kupo wrote:
Dusk Bringer wrote:Oh yeah? Well.. you smell.


YOUR FACE.

WHILE I'M ASLEEP!


IT SMELLS OF APPLE JUICE
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Postby Dusk » Fri Jan 19, 2007 11:10 pm

...really? I wonder why.
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Postby kupo » Fri Jan 19, 2007 11:12 pm

Dusk Bringer wrote:...really? I wonder why.


Perhaps someone spilled it upon your face whilst you slept?
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Postby Dusk » Fri Jan 19, 2007 11:14 pm

kupo wrote:Perhaps someone spilled it upon your face whilst you slept?

Do you drink apple juice?
Is it wizz?
Did you drink apple juice, then wizz on me while I was asleep?

WIZZ?
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Postby James » Fri Jan 19, 2007 11:38 pm

Dusk Bringer wrote:
James wrote:TOMORROW.


Just sayin'.

Oh, I recorded it. Then I started doing fancypants stuff, then I stopped doing fancypants stuff and didn't post it because I kind of wanted to do the normal version and the fancypants version together. But I could post the normal version even though it's very rubbish and very embarassing for me.

The fancypants version may be Wrong. Possibly.
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Postby kupo » Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:01 am

Dusk Bringer wrote:
kupo wrote:Perhaps someone spilled it upon your face whilst you slept?

Do you drink apple juice?
Is it wizz?
Did you drink apple juice, then wizz on me while I was asleep?

WIZZ?


It's juice. Apple. Not wizz-juice.

Apples are good for you.
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Postby Daniel. » Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:11 am

James wrote:
Dusk Bringer wrote:
James wrote:TOMORROW.


Just sayin'.

Oh, I recorded it. Then I started doing fancypants stuff, then I stopped doing fancypants stuff and didn't post it because I kind of wanted to do the normal version and the fancypants version together. But I could post the normal version even though it's very rubbish and very embarassing for me.

The fancypants version may be Wrong. Possibly.


You always do this when I ask you to record something for me! You're not a millionaire voice-over artist yet, Jamesid, you work for us!
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Postby James » Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:29 am

It's not very good.

I can't read poetry. Even joke poetry.
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Postby Daniel. » Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:42 am

Haha, that was pretty good. I like how it sounds even more pretentious and sh*t when spoken. I didn't think it would.
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Postby Nik » Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:44 am

James wrote:It's not very good.

I can't read poetry. Even joke poetry.


James, it made me smile.

And I felt the anger in the last poem. Very impressive.
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Postby kupo » Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:47 am

Daniel. wrote:Haha, that was pretty good. I like how it sounds even more pretentious and sh*t when spoken. I didn't think it would.


I agree! It was quite beautiful and moving and completely and utterly hysterical.
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